I love it!
I've been thinking of writing about the "My Girl's brother" a time but not like that, writing an other story about them, you know? ^^ But I didn't have so much ideas so, it's still in a closet for the moment xD

You did a great job, I really appriciate to read it ^__^
I think I'll explore your LJ when I would find a little more time, to see what else you have written ^__^

Thanks for sharing~