http://platinum28.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] platinum28.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] 24iza_run 2012-07-05 01:28 pm (UTC)

It is quite different from Ryuusei, but it'd be boring if it was the same, you're right about that, haha. The interest will be in what happens next. :3 I did notice that your grammar wasn't as good as in your prologue though, maybe have a little check over that? Otherwise I'll be waiting for the next chapter along with everyone else. :")

Thanks for updating!

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